Well for being Newgrounds...
...this is original indeed, but listening on the radio, it´ll unfortunatley fall into the "radio mess".
But maybe not, because this song is actually really really good. Im not a person who´s into lyrics that much, but these feel really good. It has a good poetric depth, i taste some emo in it but thats all good. Point with these kinds of lyrics many times are to get people to recognise themselves, so they feel "this is about me" kindof. And i´m sure this is bulls eye for many NG people, many creative artistic souls hang around here. The lyrics are bulls eye in many senteces for me, anyhow.
About the guitar playing, it´s really good, but I cant really decide if it´s one guitar or if it´s two??? Judging that from the plectrum sound on the chords, i guess its two :) Really great composition, ánd with the vocals it gets very rich and full. I´d love to hear this live on a pub somewhere, with a beer in my hand.
You have a great voice as well (i assume thats you). ABout the recording and mastering, i can only find one thing that irritatest me a little, and thats the room-echo. Not sure wether you´ve recorded this in your bedroom, but thats a little what it sounds like. Could be just a bad reverb effect, but it sounds "un clear" in that way.
Great job, i really hope to hear more stuff from you here on NG!
/Rucklo