First NG releas...
...was pretty fuckin good, man!
I like the battletheme, it´s really simple, still you want to know how the mission went after the first failure when the helicopter crashed, and poooooof, you´ve managed to capture the viewer. Easy trick, yet very effective.
About the animation I think you should try getting the human(cyborg?) movements a little smoother, and like some reviewer said, try get the fx AND music more in sync with whats goint on visually. It all depends if how you plan your work. I would prefer to put music and fx first, and draw a small manuscript over what´s going to happen (i never finnished a flash, but i´ve made a couple of amateur videos, so i know what im talking bout :). Perhaps thats what you did.
Anyway, it had non stop ection til the end, and I gotta say that was a pretty amusing end too :D
I´m glad you decided to use my music ;)
Keep it up, awaiting your next flash mate!
/Rucklo