Nice...
...pad in the intro. It has good meat to it, with nice reverberation and is a well built synth overall. Unfortunaltey the rest that follows isn't up to standard to that sound. When talking about this kind of music (dance/trance whatever), technical issues ARE an important factor, since if you don't have the punsh that the music in these genres have, you loose quickly. You should try to EQ your samples/loops/instrument better, and make them co-operate (if you boost bassdrum at one specific frequency, cut the same one in other low-end material that is loud there). It's an OK song, with an OK melody, but it's not very original, in any way really.
When the song nkicks in, after the first "call of duty" sample, it sounds very muddy, and not at all as clear as the intro sample.
Do check your levels too, never make it go above 0dB, or it will distort (it does very clearly in the end when the drums hammer up).
But it's definitley not the worst I've heard, I do find it rather smooth still! Keep cutting mate!