Yeah man...
...now were talking. This is not only well made, it sounds really good too! I hope to hear this in the clubs, simply!
It sounds very proffessional, i really cant think of many stuff that felt bad in this song... Perhaps that it in some plcaes felt a lil unnessecarily empty (some breakdown dow nthe road) but that wasnt important. so fuckit. :)
Anyway, y dont u review my stuff anymore? boofuckin hoo.
Bitch. :)
/Rucklo
Hahaha, 'cause just like the big weeks, I'm very busy finishing my album :) But I'll review soon; your music's always a source of inspiration :) Anyway... *blush*... thanks for calling it proffessional man. Another artist's opinion almost counts double :) See ya soon matey :)
Greetz,
Runaway
Nope man...
...this aint your doing, and at least you´re clear bout that. Go read the audioportal rules before u submit stuff like this. This is enough to get you banned from submitting music. And one more thing, this aint a remake, its a remix.
You wanna make music or do you wanna remix stuff? If you make it yourself, welcome to the Audio Portal, if you wanna make remixes, take it somewhere else. I suggest you e-mail wade and appoligise this mistake yourself, and hopefully u wont get music upload banned, before someone do it for ya.
You are making the legal claim that it is your own original work.
Loops you made from existing copyrighted songs are not your own original work.
If you turn out to not be the original author, you will be responsible for any repercussions.
You are giving permission to Flash authors to use your audio, free of charge.
You will remain the owner and credited author of the submission.
I´m surprised "allmighty sanjay", like u call him, doesnt care bout that, him being a mod and all.
Good luck not getting banned :)
/Rucklo
If you make it a remix arent you technically changing it? ParagonX9 makes remixes and his are hailed with reveiws and 5's. I was under the impression if one person could do it then all could do it. If not then by all means this should be deleted.
Well...
...this song consists of one loop and a very repetitive beat. I give you no props in effort here, anyone could do this, honestly.
You wanna learn how to make fat beats? U need more training in using a compression and limiter.
What u´ve made in this song would be the beat, i take it, and that honestly aint that good. The base drum, for exemple sux. Compress it, filter it, eq it, dont just put up the volume.
This could be a 30 sec loop...
Anyway, the one thing i think you should get cred for is finding a loop that fit nice into a hip-hop song. Thats where u get them 3 points for effort.
Overall 6 is because it sounds pretty cool, but that aint really your making...
Hope u can deal with my critisism. :)
/Rucklo
i understand.....but yo fa real if you read the info on the song i told you i was just fucking around and shit.......i spent like 15 minutes on dis.........if you wana see more effort check some of the other tracks
I really liked the guitar...
... in´thisone man. Awsome stuff!
But the drums were really boring, to be honest... Even after the beat changed in the end.. Go make this song interesting and original and sample any werid sound from your room, and create a beat out of it man :D I think im gonna do that myself now, sounded like fun ;)
The bpm shift felt very wrong, btw... it could be effectfulkl, but it didnt feel very good timed where it is now ...
Again, really nice guitarplaying here!!! Good job on that!
I was young, and needed the money...
I'd just learned that quad roll trick and I was showing it off. It's a really technical technique, I just should have used less indescernable variations of it.
Well it was...
... kinda short.
Still, it was really cool. Cant remember what stuf u use, is it reason or fl?
Some of the samples feels like theyre... a little "overused". Dunno how u made this, if u´ve been using premade loops or homemade, no matter, it was a cool song. That synth was pretty raw!
/Rucklo
i know, i overuse samples quite a bit, im gonna try using some new ones in my next ew songs.
i use FL 5 producer edition.
thanks for the review Rucklo!
Hello u...
...evil son of a whore. I never stopped by to listen to your em-songs before, so ill do that now instead, u lil wanker.
This shit is fucked up and good, u asshole. holy shit, i should assrape you for making good shit, u lil twat.
Great riffs, very good guitarplaying, it reminds me a little of an old band... cant remember what their name was... Benediction, i think it was. I listened to them when youn and stupid.
Still, of course, this shit needs a manly urghllllWÖWÖWÖWÖWÖöörgghhhh voice to make it happen. Or perhaps just add some fucking britany spears voice to it, that would make things interesting, and ppl would get dissapointed and mad at you. And that´s how one is TRULY evil, by dissapointing the fans, and making ppl sad. Yeah, mwahahahahaa
I made some metal, u shoulkd go check out "in holes" and "carcass under my bed", u son of a whore!
C u when my ban is lifted.
/Rucklo
Thanks you overweight piece of shit. I checked your "In Holes" song out a while back, and I think I reviewed it too, you son of a bastard. Hello Rucklo.
Benediction are cool too. Heavy as fuck. I'm eating my own shit while looking at pictures of you naked... RRROOOAAARRR.
Allright...
... I guess i´m the first to review your stuff mate.
This sounds really cool, I´m gonna have to admit. Is that small tempo-changes I hear? Well, that fucked up voice is really cool and adds spice to an othervice quite boring song, melody-vice. The beat is really cool though, and that´s a good thing, since this song is about just that, I take it.
There are some techniqual things that can be taken care of; first of, song is allmost peaking in a couple of spots. Especially that panning synth that comes in (not panning all the time tho). It actually feels a little low qual overall, I assume this is something you can take care of pretty easily with some equalising though.
Perhaps some really chrunchy-bad ass bass-notes here and there in well planned spots could make the song more diverse in its sound too.
Song has lots of attitude, and that´s what I´m giving it high scores for.
Nice first entry here on NG!
/Rucklo
Nicx, my first review.
I agree it could be better, yet i never put much effort into my wacked experiments.
Maybe i'll make it a full track some when,
Thx for the review ~
This was...
... A nice piece. But I think you should try messing with the instruments a little more. For example, the piano could do with some eq´ing, a lil less reverb and some velocity-messing, more velocity messing that is. The cello feeels a little misplaced, perhaps stereo-it out and then keep it more in the background? its all about what you like though. Some parts were really good, some didn´t do that much for me.
Keep going like this though, it does sound good!!!
/Rucklo
Thanks, The Chello in one part (just before the end) ends up sounding a little strange. I tried to make the note change sound file as it's playing, it doiesn't like that.
-Sid
HOLY SHIT...
... that was loud, didnt expect that. I nearly shit my pants even!
Ay, is that a little peaking I hear even? thats y u get a 7 in clarity, but if it´s only my settings that does it, i appologise. :(
Well, anyway, this song has a nice flow in the beat. My head was nodding the whole time. Later on when the synth lead comes in, it felt a liiittle bit like a mega-man song, cant remember wich one. Only a few notes or so. THats a GOOD thing, btw :D
Well, anyway this was really cool, I really enjoyed it mate, but it just didn´t feel like it happened... i dunno really. The prominent snare that came in late added some cool attitude to the song though, and that´s what saved it for me!!!
/Rucklo
definitly loud. it's annoying, i always adjust my speaker volume and computer volume and then FL volume and then i get completely disoriented on where the hell the volume is going to end up for other people. bah!
mega-man is a badass.
i'm glad you gave it a chance and stuck it through, your music is just entertaining to listen to. all those zaps and random sfx that i'm entertained the entire way through. thanks fer the review Rucklo. porr. sexy
There was a simple and...
...nice intro, the swirling vox-synth really gave a great mood to the song. The up-fade of the beat, until bassdrum comes in, was nice. The chords of that first synth are really good, but I´m not 100% sure bout that homemade bassline... :P Its smooth and all, but it kindof doesnt feel right. Perhaps it should have been darker? i dunno really. Difficult to create own instruments though, myself I do that all the time, and rareley get ant instruments i´m pleased with.
Anyhow, perhaps that what you should doing indeed, it´s fun and you get yout own sound :D
I strongly suggest you don´t use the reason soundfactory too much, that rabotnik cymbal really took my experience away, since I myself use reason, and have herad that one many times. Of course, not that many ppl actually who likes and listen to this song actually use reason, or make music at all, but still, it makes the song sound more amateur-ish, wich is totally unnessesary. There was some other noice I reckognized too... at least mess around with them, so they are more difficult to spot. Am i getting too puristic now? :D
Anyway, the song itself is, like i said, really good, it really deserves my 5. The buildup of the whole thing is just awsome.
Keep at it like this mate!
/Rucklo
I think I'm way too used to the current bass, it's like an accquired taste for simple things... so I'm not up to the challenge of making a new one!
I don't use the Factory Soundbank THAT much, but I made this song as one of my first and I thought the Rabotnik cymbal sounded really great in its role. Now that you bring it up to my attention, it does sound a little like I didn't have the incentive to search for a more original cymbal. I do mask a lot of pre-made instruments, but I didn't back when I made Ion Storm (I added EQ only now, but the song was made a while ago).
Haha you're definitely getting puristic and in this review I'm glad you are.
Thanks for the review,
-Extracy-
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