T´was allright...
This one acctually kinda lacked something, i would say a "deeper and more dimensioned" beat, if u understand what I mean. It dont have to be just drum-sounds, just something that cold be more of a backboe to the song, when there aren´t as many instruments there, fillin up a sometimes pointless void.
Anyhow, I didn´t see anything special with this track... needs more work, and by the way, screw that "guitarr" sound next time, it reeaaallllyy sux monkey dick.
No offence though, just tryin to be critical. Chekc some of my stuff n throw up on me if u like, just be constructive :D
Work on it man!